Sword Fighting Show Down: The Future

I sighed.

"That's what I thought...." I said, my voice trailing off.

"Well, then maybe we should just start walking." I said.

"Good plan," I said, mentally hitting myself for sounding and being so stupid. After that, everything was silent for a few minutes....

(Man...this is pretty good. I was thinking...would you guys want to either rewrite it or continue it?)

(Sure! I think re-writing it would be pretty cool. Although El doesn't come on much anymore...But, we could still redo this. That'd be pretty awesome. =])

(Yeah, we could have Jon and Lynn/Airi meet up again, then if El wants to join in, it'd probably be easy to write Elandri(The character) in.

...Yay! I ish excited. ^^')

(Waaah! You kidding? i'd love to do a re-write of this. It'll be a heck of a lot better than this one. )

(That's what I was thinking! Not to say this isn't pretty good, but our writing has most likely gotten even better. I know mine has. And I now have a better idea of how exactly "Future Jon" should act...A lot more distant than he was here, to say the least.)

Mm, looking back, I think my Elandri was a bit out of character.

How so?

She didn't really seem like a character, more of a Mary-Sue with emotions to suit what I was writing, not her own.

Ah.

Soo...who wants to start this rewrite?

Eh, you can if you want to. I started it last time, so you or Star can do it.

Alright then!

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Lost. That's what I was, completely and utterly lost. I was lost in this forest that seemed to go on forever, and I was really starting to get annoyed. The last thing I remembered was going to sleep, next thing I know, I'm in this forest. I'm in this forest, walking around aimlessly with nothing but the clothes on my back and a sword I barely remembered even owning.

I'd been wandering around this wretched forest for what I estimated to be about two hours when I noticed someone ahead. They looked to be a woman. I let out a sigh of relief, and started walking towards them. I was only guessing this person would know the way out, and that they would possibly be perhaps friendlier than I.

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'Tis it! Yeah...I hope it ish good.

Quick description of Jon's appearance: Black jeans, dark blue long-sleeved shirt. He has black hair that has grown down to around about the middle of his neck. ...Oh, and combat boots. Oh! And his black trenchcoat-like thing.

(Yeah, let's not delete this...I hate deleteing stuff. It's nice to be able to go back and read stuff.

Okay, I'll create a new thread and re-post. ^^ What should I name it? Just the same thing with a "Rewrite" at the end?)

(Yeah, I started thinking about that (deleting it) after I posted my previous post, and I was like "...Maybe we shouldn't delete it." But yeah, you should just name it something like "Sword Fighting Show Down: The Future (Rewrite)"...or something. '^^)

(Okay! I'll go do that now.)

(Alright! I shall sit here and wait patiently....*waits*...)

(It is posted! ^_^)

(Yay! ...Who's gonna post next?)

(Okay! ^^)