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PostSubject: Re: Write A Story Together   Write A Story Together - Page 17 Icon_minitimeSat Mar 15, 2008 1:06 am

Elaria stood, and the sword went into her side, and came out right through the other side. She couldn't be damaged. "You'll have to try harder," Elaria told him.
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(I'm guessing because it's ice? Just want to make sure.)
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(Yep!)
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(okay!)

"Then I shall try something different." He quickly made a fireball in his hand, and shot it into her stomach, knocking her back against a tree.
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"Agh," Elaria said softly, before pulling herself up.
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He was relentless. He shot fireball after fireball at her, always dead on. Wes tried to attack him, but he was easily stopped.
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Elaria was tired out. She shook her head, closing her eyes.
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(I can't really think of anything...could you post a little more? Question)
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PostSubject: Re: Write A Story Together   Write A Story Together - Page 17 Icon_minitimeSat Mar 15, 2008 1:23 am

(Yep!)
Elaria watched Taye. She knew he had used too much energy. His movements became sluggish, his face contorted with pain. "Made your last fire, Taye?" Elaria asked.
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"Not even close." He made a ball of fire, bigger then the others, in his hand. He aimed it at Elaria's face, and threw it.
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Elaria jumped up, adrenaline racing through her body. She leaped at Taye with an ice sword, ready to strike.
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He dodged it. He was behind her in a second. He kicked her in the back, making her fall forward.
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Elaira yelped. He had his foot on her back triumphantly.
Elaria glared at the dirt in front of her.
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(I think I'm going to switch the POV.)

I watched as Elaria fell forward. Taye put his foot on her back, then pressed down quite hard.
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(fine with me!)

"Agh!" Elaria yelled. "Taye," she growled. "Waht do you want?"
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Taye bent down, still pressing harder. He put his mouth right next to Elaria's ear.

"All I want, is to see you suffer, my dear."

He took out his dagger. He made a slice on the back of Elaria's neck.
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Elaria closed her eyes, bracing herself.
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I couldn't take it anymore. I could baerly move, but I had to help Elaria. He made a cut on her cheek. I saw the blood, and I knew I had to save her. I got a sudden burst of energy. I ran at him, then tackled him off of Elaria.
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Elaria pulled herself up sluggishly. Her head ached, and then felt warm liquid dripping off her face. Blood.
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He made a cut on my face, but I didn't care. He didn't seem very good in close combat. I punched him in the face, then in the stomach. Then, he did something I hadn't expected. He threw his dagger at Elaria. She hadn't been paying attention, and was still a little weak. It went straight into her leg, and I heard her grunt in pain.

"You'll pay for that!" I yelled, then punched him in the face again. I guess I was stronger then I thought, because I knocked him out. I ran over to Elaria, who was tring to pull out the dagger.
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(Elaria's POV) I winced as I tenderly touched the dagger, looking over at Wes. I stared at him.
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I saw some tears well up in her eyes. I knew it wasn't because of the pain. It was because of her brother.

"I-I'm so sorry Elaria."
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I screamed at him. "No, you're not sorry!" I yelled. "You don't even care!"
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I really was sorry.

"Yes I am, Elaria. I didn't like him very much, but a human is a human. I don't think anyone should be happy at someone dieing>"
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I shook my head. "You never even knew him"
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