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PostSubject: who can write the best song?   Mon Dec 17, 2007 1:43 pm

who can write the best song?

WHO?

winner gets a signature/avatar of their choice made by telling me!!
so plz come here
votes come up
winner will come!!!
who is it????.....who?
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PostSubject: Re: who can write the best song?   Mon Dec 17, 2007 11:45 pm

Very Happy yay!!!!!!!!!!
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PostSubject: Re: who can write the best song?   Mon Dec 17, 2007 11:49 pm

undone
I can see it your eyes you're hurting
But pain is part of learning who you are
All these truths can sometimes be deceiving
When your whole world comes crashing to the ground

Tell me everything you need now anything at all
and I will be the one who's waiting anytime you fall

yeah, When you come undone
When you come undone

You know I can't be like everybody
Cause I can't tell you what you want to hear
I don't know if I can make it better
All I know is I will be around

Tell me everything you need now anything at all
and I will be the one who's waiting anytime you fall

yeah, When you come undone
When you come undone

When all your plans are made out lying on the floor
and all your dreams are turning into nothing more
When all your hope has left you know you're not alone
Just hold on
Hold on

Tell me everything you need now anything at all
and I will be the one who's waiting anytime you fall

yeah, When you come undone
When you come undone
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PostSubject: Re: who can write the best song?   Tue Dec 18, 2007 4:07 am

Wow, cool! I'll start writing mine!
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PostSubject: Re: who can write the best song?   Tue Dec 18, 2007 12:27 pm

yours is really good

ill do mine soon...
after lozza!
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PostSubject: Re: who can write the best song?   Wed Dec 19, 2007 2:17 am

I'm almost finished!
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PostSubject: Re: who can write the best song?   Wed Dec 19, 2007 2:28 am

Sacrifice

When we think of ourselves
What do we think of?
Surely, not spoiled!
Angry and greedy

But the truth is we are
All of those things

We don’t think of those people
Without the privileges
That we have

And maybe if we work together
We can make a difference

Change someone’s life
With a small sacrifice
Show them the love
That God shows us

Change someone’s life
Just make the sacrifice

When we work together
We can make a difference

Give those people
A gift
Beyond their wildest dreams
Show them they are loved
Just make
The sacrifice
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That's my song Smile I feel really strongly about those poor people across the world, so I decided to write a song about making a sacrifice to help those people. I am also a Christian, so I have included God's love in all of that! Sorry it's so ashort, but it doesn't need to be long to get the message across, right?
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PostSubject: Re: who can write the best song?   Wed Dec 19, 2007 11:51 pm

right! i llove it
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PostSubject: Re: who can write the best song?   Thu Dec 20, 2007 9:56 am

me 2
i will write mine soon .... Smile
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PostSubject: Re: who can write the best song?   Thu Dec 20, 2007 10:19 am

it really bad because i just thought of words & fit it in.


everyday:
who can think
of a way
to stop everyday
from being a disaster
i can't ever have a day
when i want to cry the minute
everyday
hearing it...

never ever having a minute
yeah....never
think about it
everyday

calling help
scearming & shouting
every had help
without a delay

calling to help me
never a minute
everyday

its never normal
cant have a minute
with something right
no
not at all
everyday
never really wanted much
a normal minute

everyday....

calling back
help me'
never......sorry
hoping a minute is not that hard
help me...
everyday...

calling the time to help me
escape!
never a moment
without something
not going right!
helping myself
not the best thing.....
help...me.....
everyday...
calling
everyday......
help me...
everyday


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
when i wrote these words together
its seems like the person..(not me!) has an issue
Smile
hope u like it!
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PostSubject: Re: who can write the best song?   Thu Dec 20, 2007 3:30 pm

its really good
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PostSubject: Re: who can write the best song?   Fri Dec 21, 2007 5:41 am

I really like it: Well done!
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PostSubject: Re: who can write the best song?   Fri Dec 21, 2007 11:28 am

thanks Smile
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PostSubject: Re: who can write the best song?   Mon Dec 24, 2007 2:15 am

all of these are really good
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PostSubject: Re: who can write the best song?   Mon Dec 24, 2007 11:37 am

is anyone else going to?
hello?
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PostSubject: Re: who can write the best song?   Mon Dec 24, 2007 5:47 pm

has everyone posted theres that wants to??????
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PostSubject: Re: who can write the best song?   Tue Dec 25, 2007 9:05 am

guess so....ill put on the polls.
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PostSubject: Re: who can write the best song?   Thu Dec 27, 2007 9:16 am

ok good luck to everyone!
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PostSubject: Re: who can write the best song?   Thu Dec 27, 2007 10:48 pm

Okay, I'm proably too late but it's fun anyway!

Going down the road, in a fancy car
Thinking life's a piece of cake
To you it is.
To others it's not

Your fancy car
Your designer clothes
Never thinking about anyone but yourself


People have problems as well
Your fancy car
could get smashed up
and you wouldn't even care

You'd get a new one and laugh and say
"I didn't like it much anyway"

But, the people who can't afford it
will sit and stare away
at the car thats wrecked
and they can't afford
to throw away

Screeching of tires on your road
you look up to late
Suddenly it's different
Because somebody has taken your place.

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Okay, this is about somebody really rich and stuff, who don't care about anything and then they get killed or hurt or whatever at the end. And, thats what it means basically. I got the idea from a poem I wrote but it turned out a bit differently.
The poem was
Tires screech on an old country road, screams fill the air. The two cars collide with a thunderous crash, the lost hopes and dreams of the person thats past. Are drifting away along with the screams. And, as you feel yourself being pulled away you shed one last tear. Because, the person that's dead. Is You.

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PostSubject: Re: who can write the best song?   Fri Dec 28, 2007 12:52 am

Absolutely beautiful.
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PostSubject: Re: who can write the best song?   Fri Dec 28, 2007 4:24 pm

oh yeah! NOW i shall put on the polls Razz
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PostSubject: Re: who can write the best song?   Fri Dec 28, 2007 5:53 pm

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PostSubject: Re: who can write the best song?   Sat Dec 29, 2007 11:35 am

Razz
Razz
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PostSubject: Re: who can write the best song?   Sun Dec 30, 2007 5:44 am

Thanks! =)

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PostSubject: Re: who can write the best song?   Sun Dec 30, 2007 10:08 am

Razz
Razz:P
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