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El Admin
Number of posts : 4606 Registration date : 2007-04-06
| Subject: Re: Write A Story Together Sat Mar 15, 2008 1:06 am | |
| Elaria stood, and the sword went into her side, and came out right through the other side. She couldn't be damaged. "You'll have to try harder," Elaria told him. | |
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Batgirl Admin
Number of posts : 11042 Age : 29 Current Location : Here. Humor : Uh...moo? Hobbies : ...Writing, reading, volunteering, and just doing stuff. Registration date : 2008-01-08
| Subject: Re: Write A Story Together Sat Mar 15, 2008 1:08 am | |
| (I'm guessing because it's ice? Just want to make sure.) | |
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El Admin
Number of posts : 4606 Registration date : 2007-04-06
| Subject: Re: Write A Story Together Sat Mar 15, 2008 1:15 am | |
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Batgirl Admin
Number of posts : 11042 Age : 29 Current Location : Here. Humor : Uh...moo? Hobbies : ...Writing, reading, volunteering, and just doing stuff. Registration date : 2008-01-08
| Subject: Re: Write A Story Together Sat Mar 15, 2008 1:17 am | |
| (okay!)
"Then I shall try something different." He quickly made a fireball in his hand, and shot it into her stomach, knocking her back against a tree. | |
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El Admin
Number of posts : 4606 Registration date : 2007-04-06
| Subject: Re: Write A Story Together Sat Mar 15, 2008 1:17 am | |
| "Agh," Elaria said softly, before pulling herself up. | |
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Batgirl Admin
Number of posts : 11042 Age : 29 Current Location : Here. Humor : Uh...moo? Hobbies : ...Writing, reading, volunteering, and just doing stuff. Registration date : 2008-01-08
| Subject: Re: Write A Story Together Sat Mar 15, 2008 1:20 am | |
| He was relentless. He shot fireball after fireball at her, always dead on. Wes tried to attack him, but he was easily stopped. | |
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El Admin
Number of posts : 4606 Registration date : 2007-04-06
| Subject: Re: Write A Story Together Sat Mar 15, 2008 1:20 am | |
| Elaria was tired out. She shook her head, closing her eyes. | |
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Batgirl Admin
Number of posts : 11042 Age : 29 Current Location : Here. Humor : Uh...moo? Hobbies : ...Writing, reading, volunteering, and just doing stuff. Registration date : 2008-01-08
| Subject: Re: Write A Story Together Sat Mar 15, 2008 1:22 am | |
| (I can't really think of anything...could you post a little more? ) | |
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El Admin
Number of posts : 4606 Registration date : 2007-04-06
| Subject: Re: Write A Story Together Sat Mar 15, 2008 1:23 am | |
| (Yep!) Elaria watched Taye. She knew he had used too much energy. His movements became sluggish, his face contorted with pain. "Made your last fire, Taye?" Elaria asked. | |
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Batgirl Admin
Number of posts : 11042 Age : 29 Current Location : Here. Humor : Uh...moo? Hobbies : ...Writing, reading, volunteering, and just doing stuff. Registration date : 2008-01-08
| Subject: Re: Write A Story Together Sat Mar 15, 2008 2:42 am | |
| "Not even close." He made a ball of fire, bigger then the others, in his hand. He aimed it at Elaria's face, and threw it. | |
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El Admin
Number of posts : 4606 Registration date : 2007-04-06
| Subject: Re: Write A Story Together Sat Mar 15, 2008 2:58 am | |
| Elaria jumped up, adrenaline racing through her body. She leaped at Taye with an ice sword, ready to strike. | |
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Batgirl Admin
Number of posts : 11042 Age : 29 Current Location : Here. Humor : Uh...moo? Hobbies : ...Writing, reading, volunteering, and just doing stuff. Registration date : 2008-01-08
| Subject: Re: Write A Story Together Sat Mar 15, 2008 2:59 am | |
| He dodged it. He was behind her in a second. He kicked her in the back, making her fall forward. | |
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El Admin
Number of posts : 4606 Registration date : 2007-04-06
| Subject: Re: Write A Story Together Sat Mar 15, 2008 3:01 am | |
| Elaira yelped. He had his foot on her back triumphantly. Elaria glared at the dirt in front of her. | |
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Batgirl Admin
Number of posts : 11042 Age : 29 Current Location : Here. Humor : Uh...moo? Hobbies : ...Writing, reading, volunteering, and just doing stuff. Registration date : 2008-01-08
| Subject: Re: Write A Story Together Sat Mar 15, 2008 3:03 am | |
| (I think I'm going to switch the POV.)
I watched as Elaria fell forward. Taye put his foot on her back, then pressed down quite hard. | |
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El Admin
Number of posts : 4606 Registration date : 2007-04-06
| Subject: Re: Write A Story Together Sat Mar 15, 2008 3:05 am | |
| (fine with me!)
"Agh!" Elaria yelled. "Taye," she growled. "Waht do you want?" | |
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Batgirl Admin
Number of posts : 11042 Age : 29 Current Location : Here. Humor : Uh...moo? Hobbies : ...Writing, reading, volunteering, and just doing stuff. Registration date : 2008-01-08
| Subject: Re: Write A Story Together Sat Mar 15, 2008 3:08 am | |
| Taye bent down, still pressing harder. He put his mouth right next to Elaria's ear.
"All I want, is to see you suffer, my dear."
He took out his dagger. He made a slice on the back of Elaria's neck. | |
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El Admin
Number of posts : 4606 Registration date : 2007-04-06
| Subject: Re: Write A Story Together Sat Mar 15, 2008 3:09 am | |
| Elaria closed her eyes, bracing herself. | |
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Batgirl Admin
Number of posts : 11042 Age : 29 Current Location : Here. Humor : Uh...moo? Hobbies : ...Writing, reading, volunteering, and just doing stuff. Registration date : 2008-01-08
| Subject: Re: Write A Story Together Sat Mar 15, 2008 3:11 am | |
| I couldn't take it anymore. I could baerly move, but I had to help Elaria. He made a cut on her cheek. I saw the blood, and I knew I had to save her. I got a sudden burst of energy. I ran at him, then tackled him off of Elaria. | |
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El Admin
Number of posts : 4606 Registration date : 2007-04-06
| Subject: Re: Write A Story Together Sat Mar 15, 2008 3:12 am | |
| Elaria pulled herself up sluggishly. Her head ached, and then felt warm liquid dripping off her face. Blood. | |
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Batgirl Admin
Number of posts : 11042 Age : 29 Current Location : Here. Humor : Uh...moo? Hobbies : ...Writing, reading, volunteering, and just doing stuff. Registration date : 2008-01-08
| Subject: Re: Write A Story Together Sat Mar 15, 2008 3:16 am | |
| He made a cut on my face, but I didn't care. He didn't seem very good in close combat. I punched him in the face, then in the stomach. Then, he did something I hadn't expected. He threw his dagger at Elaria. She hadn't been paying attention, and was still a little weak. It went straight into her leg, and I heard her grunt in pain.
"You'll pay for that!" I yelled, then punched him in the face again. I guess I was stronger then I thought, because I knocked him out. I ran over to Elaria, who was tring to pull out the dagger. | |
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El Admin
Number of posts : 4606 Registration date : 2007-04-06
| Subject: Re: Write A Story Together Sat Mar 15, 2008 3:17 am | |
| (Elaria's POV) I winced as I tenderly touched the dagger, looking over at Wes. I stared at him. | |
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Batgirl Admin
Number of posts : 11042 Age : 29 Current Location : Here. Humor : Uh...moo? Hobbies : ...Writing, reading, volunteering, and just doing stuff. Registration date : 2008-01-08
| Subject: Re: Write A Story Together Sat Mar 15, 2008 3:18 am | |
| I saw some tears well up in her eyes. I knew it wasn't because of the pain. It was because of her brother.
"I-I'm so sorry Elaria." | |
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El Admin
Number of posts : 4606 Registration date : 2007-04-06
| Subject: Re: Write A Story Together Sat Mar 15, 2008 3:21 am | |
| I screamed at him. "No, you're not sorry!" I yelled. "You don't even care!" | |
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Batgirl Admin
Number of posts : 11042 Age : 29 Current Location : Here. Humor : Uh...moo? Hobbies : ...Writing, reading, volunteering, and just doing stuff. Registration date : 2008-01-08
| Subject: Re: Write A Story Together Sat Mar 15, 2008 3:23 am | |
| I really was sorry.
"Yes I am, Elaria. I didn't like him very much, but a human is a human. I don't think anyone should be happy at someone dieing>" | |
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El Admin
Number of posts : 4606 Registration date : 2007-04-06
| Subject: Re: Write A Story Together Sat Mar 15, 2008 3:24 am | |
| I shook my head. "You never even knew him" | |
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