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Now it was Elaria's turn to scream. Taye was now decorating her leg, putting all kinds of scars onto it. "Will I die here?"
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"No, I won't do that. If I did that, I wouldn't be able to put you in more pain." he answered smugly. He re-inserted the dagger in her leg, and did the same thing again. Wes decided that now was the time to attack. He was hunting to kill. He ran up silently behind Taye, and stabbed him in the back. Taye let out a long scream of agony befor dropping down dead. Wes crouched down next to Elaria. She was staring straight ahead at nothing. She was in shock. First she had these wounds put into her, then, she watches Taye die. She didn't like him, of course, but its still quite tramuatizing to see someone die.
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"No!" She yelled. "You idiot, Wes, you killed him!"
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"What should I have done?! He was hurting you! Listen, Elaria, I knwo you're worried about what's gonna happen when you go back to your little "Ashe", but you need to know something. You may never go back! I have no way to get you back. You may just have to live here for the rest of your life. So you need to stop wottying about what's gonna happen when you go back to Ashe, because that's never going to happen!"
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"No! I'm going back to Ashe!" Elaria yelled. "I'm going to see Arashi!"
"Just let me go!"
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"Elaria! Stop trying to get up! You'll hurt yourself even more!"
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"Let me go!" Elaria screamed. "I just wanna go back home!" Her screaming turned to sobs.
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"Elaria." Wes sat down next to her and hugged her.

"I'm sorry. It's gonna be okay."

He stroked her hair as she cried on his shoulder.
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"It's not gonna be okay! It's not!" I cried.
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"Elaria. Listen, I know you wanna go back to Ashe, but its not so bad here, is it?"
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"yes! it is!" Elaria said. "I just want to go home. See Arashi and everyone else!"
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"Who's Arashi?"
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"My... brother." Elaria said, reluctantly.
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"Oh. I'm really sorry, Elaria. Listen, we need to get back to the house."

Wes picked Elaria up, and started walking.
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"No!" I told him. "I just wanna go!"
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Wes sighed. He set Elaria down, and started walking.
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"Leave me alone," Elaria insisted, defeated.
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Wes turned around and replied.

"Fine. I will. You can sit there and die for all I care. I tried to be nice. I fell in love with you. I kissed you, and all you do is yell at me. I'm done. Let the police find you and deal with you."
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"Fine," Elaria said adamantly.
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Wes turned around and kept on walking. Elaria was confident, but she soon realized that she could barely move. She also remembere the stuff she saw on the TV with the police. She was defiant before, but she was now a little worried.
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Elaria still kept her ground. She healed herself, but only enough to ease the pain.
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Wes was walking back to the house, when he realized something. He couldn't belive he had just done that. He loved Elaria, and he had just left her to die. He ran back towards her.
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She was bored. Elaria stared up at the clouds, being pulled into a trance by their beauty.
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Wes came back and saw Elaria lying on the ground. He rushed over towards her.

"Elaria! Are you okay?!"
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"Of course I'm okay, idiot," Elaria said.
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