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Batgirl Admin
Number of posts : 11042 Age : 29 Current Location : Here. Humor : Uh...moo? Hobbies : ...Writing, reading, volunteering, and just doing stuff. Registration date : 2008-01-08
| Subject: Re: Poems.... Sun Oct 26, 2008 3:21 am | |
| Yeah...I guess that's what it was. I try not to ryhme too much. If I start to ryhme in one part, then can't in another, I mess up a little. | |
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Spooky Admin
Number of posts : 4997 Age : 29 Current Location : Why?....Are you stalking me?! o.O' Humor : "Every fight is a food fight when you're a canibal"....What? Hobbies : Things....Certain things.... Registration date : 2008-02-12
| Subject: Re: Poems.... Sun Oct 26, 2008 3:28 am | |
| Yeah, same with me. But, surprisingly, I'm actually pretty good at rhyming. I mean, it has to be certain things, cuz I'm not good at rhyming with EVERYTHING...'^^ | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Poems.... Sun Oct 26, 2008 8:59 am | |
| Nooooooooooooooooooo.................. Kayla, don't kill yourself! PLEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAASSSSEEEEEEEEEE!!!!! |
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Batgirl Admin
Number of posts : 11042 Age : 29 Current Location : Here. Humor : Uh...moo? Hobbies : ...Writing, reading, volunteering, and just doing stuff. Registration date : 2008-01-08
| Subject: Re: Poems.... Sun Oct 26, 2008 4:29 pm | |
| [7/21/09 Admin Edit] Never in a million years!
Last edited by Batgirl on Wed Jul 22, 2009 2:07 am; edited 1 time in total | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Poems.... Wed Oct 29, 2008 6:45 am | |
| Phew. Thank goodness. Danke Gott. Danke Gott. |
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Spooky Admin
Number of posts : 4997 Age : 29 Current Location : Why?....Are you stalking me?! o.O' Humor : "Every fight is a food fight when you're a canibal"....What? Hobbies : Things....Certain things.... Registration date : 2008-02-12
| Subject: Re: Poems.... Sun Nov 30, 2008 11:48 pm | |
| Okay, I've realized (thanks to a "recent situation" on this site) that I can't always ignore my problems. Sometimes, I've got to face them, even if I don't want to...
So, instead of either ignoring the problems (I have) or taking them out on other people, I'll write these nice little...weird....not-too-positive poems. Here's one, titled "I Want....":
---- It seemed like, for once in my life, I wanted to feel beautiful.
I wanted to be important.
I wanted to be the topic of someone's positive disucssion.
But that's when I realized that it was impossible.
Who was I?
I was no one.
I was an outcast at school, and just another human being everywhere else.
To my friends (at school), I was someone to talk to when they needed help, or even if they were just bored and had nothing better to do.
As far as friendship (again, at school) goes, I was just another loner, walking the school halls, practicly invisible.
I want, I want...Like it even matters.
What does it matter?
I am no one.... ----
Yeah, that was based on some sudden realization I had after I felt like prepping myself up to fit in at school....=/ | |
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El Admin
Number of posts : 4606 Registration date : 2007-04-06
| Subject: Re: Poems.... Mon Dec 01, 2008 3:16 am | |
| This was for an English assignment entitled "True Courage". If you're interested in more of my courage poetry for this assignment I'll post it.
To step out from comfort and warmth When it’s simpler to hide away To walk on through fears and doubts Even though they seem ominous
To be the change that you wish to see Even when it seems that the world is against you To stand up for what is right Though it is easier to stand back and watch injustice dealt
To leave fears behind in the dust And move forward Because true courage is not the absence of fear But the willingness to proceed in spite of it | |
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Spooky Admin
Number of posts : 4997 Age : 29 Current Location : Why?....Are you stalking me?! o.O' Humor : "Every fight is a food fight when you're a canibal"....What? Hobbies : Things....Certain things.... Registration date : 2008-02-12
| Subject: Re: Poems.... Mon Dec 01, 2008 3:45 am | |
| Awesome, El! Nice job! ^.^ | |
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El Admin
Number of posts : 4606 Registration date : 2007-04-06
| Subject: Re: Poems.... Mon Dec 01, 2008 4:42 am | |
| Why thank you. I think this is one of my favourite from my little "courage" series. | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Poems.... Mon Dec 01, 2008 7:00 am | |
| If I was to give
if I was to give Our society a face what would it be like? Male or Female? Old or Young? Would it be attactive or would it be ugly would it be smiling? Or imbued with greed? The smile for consumerism, everything's okay. You need this item to change your life.
Would it scowl down on us all for our superficial lies, and our cheap love,
Or would it forgive us?
Would it Smile on the succesfull and scorn the poor
or would it be the other way around?
If I was to give our society a face, would it be healthy or would it be tired and sad
and a plastic bag flies past in the wind and I stand here and think. think about our world.
If I was to give the past a face
would it be lost today
or would it smile at the nostalgia of days gone by
The smile for consumerism, everything's okay. You need this item to change your life.
Would the past be sad at what it's world became or marvel at the changes
If I was to give the future a face would it be foreboding scary unfamiliar
would it look down upon our simple ways and laugh like we laugh at people of the past today
and a bird flies over the wind blows in my ear and I hear a voice and I see a face
the face of suffering
crying out help
then I wake up and the sun is rising and it is raining the cars are driving the people are working
and I see the face and it is sad. |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Poems.... Sun Dec 21, 2008 1:13 am | |
| This short poem has to do with emotion and not fitting in.
The weather is hot It feels way too hot to do anything But I am cold I'll be too cold to let your love in
The people are happy Having too much fun to give me a thought and I'm alone But I'll be here because you're all that I've got |
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Batgirl Admin
Number of posts : 11042 Age : 29 Current Location : Here. Humor : Uh...moo? Hobbies : ...Writing, reading, volunteering, and just doing stuff. Registration date : 2008-01-08
| Subject: Re: Poems.... Sun Dec 21, 2008 4:16 am | |
| "If I was To Give"-That was amazing. I really, really liked it, Kip. This last one-Still very good. | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Poems.... Sun Dec 21, 2008 11:51 am | |
| ^^ I'm so glad you liked it Kayla. I never think my poetry is that good so when someone says they like it it makes me feel very pleased. <^_^> |
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Spooky Admin
Number of posts : 4997 Age : 29 Current Location : Why?....Are you stalking me?! o.O' Humor : "Every fight is a food fight when you're a canibal"....What? Hobbies : Things....Certain things.... Registration date : 2008-02-12
| Subject: Re: Poems.... Sun Dec 28, 2008 7:39 am | |
| Okay, this is a poem called...uhmm...okay, it doesn't have a title. I shall call it...Sick! But here it goes. '^^ --- Sick
Sick with sorrow Sick with grief Sick with pain No relief So steal my heart So steal my soul And take the pain back Just like a theif
You say you're there But save your breath You know it's a lie So don't even try You can't trick me Sometimes, I wish for your death
And I walk away With tears stinging my eyes You cannot trick me So don't even try...
I'm sick of this I'm sick of the lies I'm sick of you I'm sick of goodbyes
Sick with sorrow Sick with grief Sick with pain And no relief...
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Batgirl Admin
Number of posts : 11042 Age : 29 Current Location : Here. Humor : Uh...moo? Hobbies : ...Writing, reading, volunteering, and just doing stuff. Registration date : 2008-01-08
| Subject: Re: Poems.... Fri Sep 18, 2009 5:11 am | |
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