Poems....

What the title says: poems! Okay, MY poems!
And by "MY poems", I mean poems that I've written!
Most of the time, I will describe the poem I'm posting here. ^_^

To me, poetry is both soothing, and a little relaxing. It's also calming, and a good way to let all of your emotions out. ^^

Okay, this poem (I'm putting in a different post) is called "Glitterfly"! I wrote it in under, like, 10 minutes, so it's not one of my "better" ones.

Anyway, this poem pretty much explains (some) of my envy towards other girls or guys (like the preps at my school, who think they're better than everyone else), and how I can actually sort relate to them. I chose a butterfly as the main object because I think it resembles beauty and gracefulness (is that even a word? ), and it's such a fragile thing, just like life and beauty. Honestly, I think that looks don't matter; it's what's on the inside that counts. ^^

Anyway....I guess I should get on with the poem, huh? '^^

Very beautiful concept, however, I don't think the wording was meaningful enough to convey the true, gorgeous meaning across to other readers.

Yeah, I know. Like I said, this is one of my "not-so-good" ones. '^^
I'll deffinatly post one of my better ones on here soon! ^_^

well i liked it.

Right.....I'll try posting another one of mine soon! ^_^

sounds great!

Yay!

What do you like to write poetry about star?

Yeah, what kinds of poetry do you write? Oh, and I also added another of my poems.

Yeah, it's great! Go check it out! Like, now! ........Why haven't you gone to check it out yet?!

Hehe. To answer an old question (), I like writing all kinds of poetry. Mostly just things that would either express my emotions, or maybe inspire other people. It really depends on the mood I'm in when I write it. '^^

Oh, like the "write-whatever-I-want" kind of poetry? Sounds pretty good to me. That's mostly what I do too. Write whatever my mind weaves!

Yeah, pretty much! ^^

Huzzah for that!

phew

Umm....what was the "phew" for, Eden?

Oh, and I'm gonna post a few more of my poems here (finally )!! I'll put them in a seperate post...'^^

Okay, this first poem is a Cinquain (not sure if I spelled that right '^^). It's pretty much just a simple one about dark and light, dark and bright, or whatever you wanna say. But honestly, I think it sorta describes me a LITTLE. I mean, I can be all dark and negative, but then, the next day or whatever, I'll be all bright and happy (yes, some people think I'm Bipolar ). So...yeah....Here it is!


Yeah, I know, it sucks. =/

But Star, that is soooo clever! It puts my stuff to shame. I love it! I'll start a cult religion for it!
WHOOO!

Wait....My poem started a religion?? Woah....O.O

Uh...thanks, Kip!!!!
You really think it was good? '^^

I shall now post a haiku that I made in about three minutes. '^^
Yesh, it kinda sucks, and it kinda makes no sense. But if you knew what I had to go through (mostly at school '^^), you'd understand it completely. Anyway, here it is:

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I am so confused
Nobody there to listen
And nobody cares....
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Yep, that was it. That's what I came up with in under five minutes. It usually takes me longer to make a good poem, which is why it's so simple. '^^

[7/21/09 Admin Edit]

Meh. Again.

Woah, I wrote a poem like that once! But it was longer, and it was more like a story. Heh. '^^

But it was good!! That was free-verse, right?

...I have no idea. What's free-verse?

Free-verse poems are basically poems that don't rhyme, or don't have a certain set of stanzas, syllables, ect. Here's an example of a free-verse poems (this one's kinda..."extreme" as far as free-verses go; they're not all this...different '^^):
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If I went away,
There would be no loss
It wouldn't make a difference
Because nobody really cares

I pour out my feelings
Not something I ever do
But do you listen?
Of course not!

You're too wrapped up
In your happy little perks
While I sit in a corner
Slowly dying
Watching you laugh and stare.
Because you don't care.
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That's part of my (very long '^^) free-verse poem, called "Feelings". Maybe I'll post the whole thing on here sometime....