Naruto roleplay- number 3

Me: *Runs up to Orochimaru, stabbing him in the heart. Suddenly falls onto her kneew, the posion starting to take affect.* N-not before he d-dies....*Stabs Orochimaru in the neck. One of the snakes tries to bite her, but dodges it, grabbing it and making it bote Orochimaru numerous times on his legs and arms. He falls onto the ground, gasping.*

Orochimaru: You...FOOL! *Suddenly gets up, like nothing happened at all, all of his snakes attack Rav*

Me: Oh no you don't.....*Slashes at the snakes that attack her, cutting them in half. Some of the snakes actually seem to understand what's going on, and are stupid enough not to attack. Speaks to the snakes.* Hey, attack him*Gestures to Orochimaru*, and I won't kill you. *The snakes seem to understand, all of a sudden attacking Orochimaru.*

Orochimaru: No, NO! You're supposed to obey me! Aggghhhh!!!! *The snakes bite into him. All of a sudden, him and the snakes disappear, but not before he whispers something to Rav.* You've won this time, but I'll be backkkk.

Me: *Smiles slightly, then falls onto the ground, everything going black.*

Me: Rav! *Catches her*

Shizune: GAH! *Picks up RAV, And runs off back to the medical room*

Jeriyah: Good work...

Me: *Can hear voices around her, as she's being set down on something soft. A bed. Passes in and out of concsiones, but hears Shizune say "It doesn't look too good."*

(I'll be RIGHT back! Don't go anywhere!)

Shizune and Tsunade: *Both put there hands on Rav, glowing with chakra, trying to heal her*

Jeriyah: *Sighs*

Me: *Can feel hands on her, but is feeling cold. She can feel that it isn't working.*

Shizune: IT'S NOT WORKING!

Tsunade: UH! *Runs to the medical cabniet, grabs a purple liquid, and throws it to Shizune*

Me: *Feels someone poor something down her throat, but is so cold. Opens her eyes a little.* *Barely down to a whisper* so....cold...*blacks out again.*

Me: *Runs into the room* What's gonig on!?

Tsunade: *Turns around and blocks Sakura's view.* Maybe you shouldn't be in here, Sakura.....

Me: Oh? ...

Jeriyah: *Walks in, puts his hand on Sakura's shoulder* Comon.

Tsunade: Go with Jeriyah, Sakura. I don't want you to see...Rav. (I gotta go!)

Me: *Nods, then slowly turns around, and starts to walk away*...

Jeriyah:...*Follows Sakura*
...I'm sorry about your friend...

Me:....What are you talking about? Rav is going to be fine, I know it!

Jeriyah: Kid.....she isn't doin' so good. We couldn't heal her....and....that stuff is killing her. She's not gonna make it.

Me: HUH!? *Turns around to run back*

Jeriyah: *Puts his arm out so she can't run back* I'm sorry...

Me: ....

Jeriyah: You can't go back there. Now c'mon.*Turns Sakura around and starts walking again. But, Sakura runs back to thr room when Jeruyah isn't paying attention.*

Jeriyah: SAKURA! *Dosen't follow her, sighs* That's some kid.

Me: *Dashes into the room*

Shizune: *Turns around when she hears someone come into the room.* Lady Tsunade, could you get her out of here?

Tsunade: Well, if the kid wants to see her friend.....

*Slows down, and glances at Shizune and Lady Tsunade's faces* Um...?

Tsunade: You really want to see?

Me: *Nods*

Tsunade: *Turns to Shizune* Then let her.

Shizune: *Steps to the side, for Sakura to see Rav who looks.... (Finish the sentence!)

*Very pale.*

Me: *Opens her eyes a little and looks over at Sakura*

Me: *Blinks* Oh...

Jeriyah: *Walks into the room* Ok, Sakura, I think you've seen enough.

Me:*Struggles to talk, and only a whisper comes out.* n-no....sh-she...c-can...st-st..ay....