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Spooky Admin
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| Subject: Re: I wrote... a... story... yeah. Wed Jul 23, 2008 1:02 am | |
| - Batgirl wrote:
- I believe Star started hers before that. Star?
Yeah, I started my story a little before that. I started Star's story about....4 and a half years ago....maybe five....Anywho, it was one of my first Avatar fanfics! (I started writing other stories (like, not fanfics) when I was in 3rd grade! I just started writing fanfics about 5 years ago). And, like Emiri, I didn't base my story on anyone else's story....And, also like Emiri, I didn't even know she (Emiri) existed two years ago, much less four. '^^ | |
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Batgirl Admin
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| Subject: Re: I wrote... a... story... yeah. Wed Jul 23, 2008 1:04 am | |
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Emiri rarusonu Great Member
Number of posts : 241 Current Location : A dark ally filled with bat and vampires. Lol jk. XD Humor : Time is a great teacher, but unfortunately it kills all its pupils ... ^_^' Hobbies : Writing, watching naruto and avatar, and being on the computer! Registration date : 2008-07-07
| Subject: Re: I wrote... a... story... yeah. Wed Jul 23, 2008 1:07 am | |
| Yep, so.... wierd, it's like our brains are hooked together into writing. Lol, that.... would look wierd... | |
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Spooky Admin
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| Subject: Re: I wrote... a... story... yeah. Wed Jul 23, 2008 1:11 am | |
| That would look VERY weird....But I'm SURE our stories are quite different, Emiri....Right? What's the main plot-thingy in your story? (Sorry, I just wanna make sure we didn't write, like, the SAME EXACT story '^^ ) | |
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Emiri rarusonu Great Member
Number of posts : 241 Current Location : A dark ally filled with bat and vampires. Lol jk. XD Humor : Time is a great teacher, but unfortunately it kills all its pupils ... ^_^' Hobbies : Writing, watching naruto and avatar, and being on the computer! Registration date : 2008-07-07
| Subject: Re: I wrote... a... story... yeah. Wed Jul 23, 2008 1:21 am | |
| Ok... hmm, the main plot is that she masters her airbending, and her "spirit" inside of her. Sometimes the plot switches, depending on what she's doing. So, right, our stories at quite diffrent. (Lol, yeah!) | |
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Spooky Admin
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| Subject: Re: I wrote... a... story... yeah. Wed Jul 23, 2008 1:24 am | |
| Ooh, okay! Well, the main plot of my story is Star (the 15 year old Airbender ) trying to find the Avatar. Of course, half way through, she does, and so the plot changes. And the sequel has a different plot, too. ^^ It's jus that our characters almost sounded EXACTLY the same, and that'd be...kinda freaky. Let's see...Star is 15, long brown hair and gray eyes. Let's explain our characters (if you will), just to make sure they're not, like I said, EXACTLY the same | |
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Emiri rarusonu Great Member
Number of posts : 241 Current Location : A dark ally filled with bat and vampires. Lol jk. XD Humor : Time is a great teacher, but unfortunately it kills all its pupils ... ^_^' Hobbies : Writing, watching naruto and avatar, and being on the computer! Registration date : 2008-07-07
| Subject: Re: I wrote... a... story... yeah. Wed Jul 23, 2008 1:29 am | |
| Yeah, see! My character just kinda ran into the avatar while escaping from the orphanage.... Well, she was inda thrown off the cliff and...um... Long story! Yeah, every sequal, the plot changes! XD Same here! They did, but lets see yes, Amber is 16, (she was 14 when the book started) She has medium (past her shoulders) dark blond hair and hazel eyes. Dosen't sound anything like yours! Yey! Haha. | |
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Spooky Admin
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| Subject: Re: I wrote... a... story... yeah. Wed Jul 23, 2008 1:46 am | |
| Star was 14 when the story started, and she turns 15 sometime in the first book. In the sequel, she's still 15. And, in this sequel that I haven't even started yet, she turns 16.
She has long, brown hair that reaches to her knees, grey eyes, and she's pretty skinny. All in all, a beautiful girl. Her parents were killed by the Fire Nation (or where they? That's one of the plots '^^), and she's pretty much a nomad for the first part of the story..... | |
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Emiri rarusonu Great Member
Number of posts : 241 Current Location : A dark ally filled with bat and vampires. Lol jk. XD Humor : Time is a great teacher, but unfortunately it kills all its pupils ... ^_^' Hobbies : Writing, watching naruto and avatar, and being on the computer! Registration date : 2008-07-07
| Subject: Re: I wrote... a... story... yeah. Wed Jul 23, 2008 1:56 am | |
| Amber's in the orphanage for the first part, then she runs away, she had been brainwashed by the dai li, and later remembers her past. Her dad was killed by an earthkingdom soldier and her mother is no where to be found. I'm on my 8th book though..... Yep. | |
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Batgirl Admin
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| Subject: Re: I wrote... a... story... yeah. Wed Jul 23, 2008 1:59 am | |
| Why was her dad killed by an Earth Kingdom Soldier? | |
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Spooky Admin
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| Subject: Re: I wrote... a... story... yeah. Wed Jul 23, 2008 2:00 am | |
| That's....interesting. I take more time on writing one book, so I don't rush, which is probably why I only have two, working on the third....I just don't like to rush the story. And, of course, each story is like, 30 something chapters. '^^
Star's parents were taken away (and killed) in a raid on her village. Also, all of her friends, and pretty much anyone else she knew, was killed that day, too. So she's on her own for most of the story....Then, when the Fire Nation takes MORE people she knew and loved...well, that's pretty much when she gets a little "darker" than normal.... | |
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Emiri rarusonu Great Member
Number of posts : 241 Current Location : A dark ally filled with bat and vampires. Lol jk. XD Humor : Time is a great teacher, but unfortunately it kills all its pupils ... ^_^' Hobbies : Writing, watching naruto and avatar, and being on the computer! Registration date : 2008-07-07
| Subject: Re: I wrote... a... story... yeah. Wed Jul 23, 2008 2:03 am | |
| Her dad was a firenation soldier, killed by an earth kingdom soldier in battle. So Amber dose have some firebender blood in her, which can often exsplain some of her anger. | |
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Spooky Admin
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| Subject: Re: I wrote... a... story... yeah. Wed Jul 23, 2008 2:06 am | |
| Star's just pretty much Earth Kingdom, and some Air Nomad. Her Air Nomad part is the more dominant part in her genes, but somehow, thanks to her great-grandparents, she has Airbenders blood (a little more than neccisary '^^). And, since every Air Nomad is born an Airbender...well, you get the idea. '^^ | |
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Emiri rarusonu Great Member
Number of posts : 241 Current Location : A dark ally filled with bat and vampires. Lol jk. XD Humor : Time is a great teacher, but unfortunately it kills all its pupils ... ^_^' Hobbies : Writing, watching naruto and avatar, and being on the computer! Registration date : 2008-07-07
| Subject: Re: I wrote... a... story... yeah. Wed Jul 23, 2008 2:09 am | |
| Yep. You know Amber's story star, she gre up in the watertribe, ran away, found Zuko, found the other peoples. Yeah but, Amber's grandma on her moms side was an airbender (her great grandparents where both airbenders, so she has ALOT of air nomad blood) and like you said, every Air Nomad is born an Airbender, her grandpa on her moms side was a waterbender, so that's why her mom wasen't an airbender- but a waterbender. The traits where just passed along to Amber. | |
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Spooky Admin
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| Subject: Re: I wrote... a... story... yeah. Wed Jul 23, 2008 2:13 am | |
| Ooh, interesting! That's pretty much what happened in Star's case. Both of her great, great grandparents were Air Nomads, and her grandfather was an Air Nomad, as well. Then her grandmother wasn't a full-blooded Air Nomad, but she was pretty much...half. Then, both of her parents were Earth Kingdom. So it's very rare that she's an Airbender at all.... | |
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Emiri rarusonu Great Member
Number of posts : 241 Current Location : A dark ally filled with bat and vampires. Lol jk. XD Humor : Time is a great teacher, but unfortunately it kills all its pupils ... ^_^' Hobbies : Writing, watching naruto and avatar, and being on the computer! Registration date : 2008-07-07
| Subject: Re: I wrote... a... story... yeah. Wed Jul 23, 2008 2:14 am | |
| Same for Amber, lol, exscept instead of earth, it's fire for Amber. Amber's Grandparent's (great grandparents and her grandma) where all killed off by the firenation. | |
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Spooky Admin
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| Subject: Re: I wrote... a... story... yeah. Wed Jul 23, 2008 2:16 am | |
| Ooh, I see. Well, obviously, Star's great, great-grandparents were killed by the Fire Nation, and nobody knows how her grandparents died. Her parents were killed by the Fire Nation (along with all her friends and practicly anyone she ever knew.) She's had a rough life. '^^ | |
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Emiri rarusonu Great Member
Number of posts : 241 Current Location : A dark ally filled with bat and vampires. Lol jk. XD Humor : Time is a great teacher, but unfortunately it kills all its pupils ... ^_^' Hobbies : Writing, watching naruto and avatar, and being on the computer! Registration date : 2008-07-07
| Subject: Re: I wrote... a... story... yeah. Wed Jul 23, 2008 2:18 am | |
| Most people do in teh avatar world. Hey! Amber's great grandparents and Stars great-grandparents probably knew each other!!! | |
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Spooky Admin
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| Subject: Re: I wrote... a... story... yeah. Wed Jul 23, 2008 2:21 am | |
| Yeah, probably! Well, it depends on which Air Temple they grew up in...But yeah, the might've known each other! Ooh, maybe Star and Amber are related! ( ) | |
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Emiri rarusonu Great Member
Number of posts : 241 Current Location : A dark ally filled with bat and vampires. Lol jk. XD Humor : Time is a great teacher, but unfortunately it kills all its pupils ... ^_^' Hobbies : Writing, watching naruto and avatar, and being on the computer! Registration date : 2008-07-07
| Subject: Re: I wrote... a... story... yeah. Thu Jul 24, 2008 12:31 am | |
| Right! Ooooooh maybe!!!! | |
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| Subject: Re: I wrote... a... story... yeah. Mon Aug 04, 2008 10:05 am | |
| maybe star and ambers grandparents got it on! |
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Batgirl Admin
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| Subject: Re: I wrote... a... story... yeah. Mon Aug 04, 2008 4:38 pm | |
| *Trie not to laugh* Now.....Kip.......that kind of stuff.....isn't exctly........Bwahahahahahaha!!!!! That was hilarious! | |
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Emiri rarusonu Great Member
Number of posts : 241 Current Location : A dark ally filled with bat and vampires. Lol jk. XD Humor : Time is a great teacher, but unfortunately it kills all its pupils ... ^_^' Hobbies : Writing, watching naruto and avatar, and being on the computer! Registration date : 2008-07-07
| Subject: Re: I wrote... a... story... yeah. Mon Aug 04, 2008 9:16 pm | |
| HAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!! | |
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Spooky Admin
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| Subject: Re: I wrote... a... story... yeah. Tue Aug 05, 2008 5:22 am | |
| Okay, that was.....messed up. In SO many ways.....*puts head in hands and sighs* | |
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| Subject: Re: I wrote... a... story... yeah. Tue Aug 05, 2008 8:44 am | |
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