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PostSubject: Re: I wrote... a... story... yeah.   I wrote... a... story... yeah. - Page 2 Icon_minitimeWed Jul 23, 2008 1:02 am

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I believe Star started hers before that. Star?

Yeah, I started my story a little before that. I started Star's story about....4 and a half years ago....maybe five....Anywho, it was one of my first Avatar fanfics! (I started writing other stories (like, not fanfics) when I was in 3rd grade! I just started writing fanfics about 5 years ago).

And, like Emiri, I didn't base my story on anyone else's story....And, also like Emiri, I didn't even know she (Emiri) existed two years ago, much less four. '^^
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Hm.
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Yep, so.... wierd, it's like our brains are hooked together into writing. Lol, that.... would look wierd...
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That would look VERY weird....But I'm SURE our stories are quite different, Emiri....Right? What's the main plot-thingy in your story? (Sorry, I just wanna make sure we didn't write, like, the SAME EXACT story '^^ Razz)
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Ok... hmm, the main plot is that she masters her airbending, and her "spirit" inside of her.

Sometimes the plot switches, depending on what she's doing.

So, right, our stories at quite diffrent. Smile

(Lol, yeah!)
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Ooh, okay! Well, the main plot of my story is Star (the 15 year old Airbender Razz) trying to find the Avatar. Of course, half way through, she does, and so the plot changes. And the sequel has a different plot, too. ^^

It's jus that our characters almost sounded EXACTLY the same, and that'd be...kinda freaky. Let's see...Star is 15, long brown hair and gray eyes. Let's explain our characters (if you will), just to make sure they're not, like I said, EXACTLY the same Razz
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Yeah, see! My character just kinda ran into the avatar while escaping from the orphanage.... Well, she was inda thrown off the cliff and...um... Long story!
Yeah, every sequal, the plot changes! XD Same here!

They did, but lets see yes, Amber is 16, (she was 14 when the book started) She has medium (past her shoulders) dark blond hair and hazel eyes.

Dosen't sound anything like yours! Very Happy Yey! Haha.
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Star was 14 when the story started, and she turns 15 sometime in the first book. In the sequel, she's still 15. And, in this sequel that I haven't even started yet, she turns 16.

She has long, brown hair that reaches to her knees, grey eyes, and she's pretty skinny. All in all, a beautiful girl. Her parents were killed by the Fire Nation (or where they? That's one of the plots '^^), and she's pretty much a nomad for the first part of the story.....
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Amber's in the orphanage for the first part, then she runs away, she had been brainwashed by the dai li, and later remembers her past.

Her dad was killed by an earthkingdom soldier and her mother is no where to be found.

I'm on my 8th book though..... Yep. Razz
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Why was her dad killed by an Earth Kingdom Soldier?
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That's....interesting. I take more time on writing one book, so I don't rush, which is probably why I only have two, working on the third....I just don't like to rush the story. And, of course, each story is like, 30 something chapters. '^^

Star's parents were taken away (and killed) in a raid on her village. Also, all of her friends, and pretty much anyone else she knew, was killed that day, too. So she's on her own for most of the story....Then, when the Fire Nation takes MORE people she knew and loved...well, that's pretty much when she gets a little "darker" than normal....
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Her dad was a firenation soldier, killed by an earth kingdom soldier in battle. So Amber dose have some firebender blood in her, which can often exsplain some of her anger.
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Star's just pretty much Earth Kingdom, and some Air Nomad. Her Air Nomad part is the more dominant part in her genes, but somehow, thanks to her great-grandparents, she has Airbenders blood (a little more than neccisary '^^). And, since every Air Nomad is born an Airbender...well, you get the idea. '^^
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Yep. Smile You know Amber's story star, she gre up in the watertribe, ran away, found Zuko, found the other peoples. Yeah but, Amber's grandma on her moms side was an airbender (her great grandparents where both airbenders, so she has ALOT of air nomad blood) and like you said, every Air Nomad is born an Airbender, her grandpa on her moms side was a waterbender, so that's why her mom wasen't an airbender- but a waterbender. The traits where just passed along to Amber. Smile
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Ooh, interesting! That's pretty much what happened in Star's case. Both of her great, great grandparents were Air Nomads, and her grandfather was an Air Nomad, as well. Then her grandmother wasn't a full-blooded Air Nomad, but she was pretty much...half. Then, both of her parents were Earth Kingdom. So it's very rare that she's an Airbender at all....
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Same for Amber, lol, exscept instead of earth, it's fire for Amber. Amber's Grandparent's (great grandparents and her grandma) where all killed off by the firenation.
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Ooh, I see. Well, obviously, Star's great, great-grandparents were killed by the Fire Nation, and nobody knows how her grandparents died. Her parents were killed by the Fire Nation (along with all her friends and practicly anyone she ever knew.) She's had a rough life. Razz '^^
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Most people do in teh avatar world. Smile

Hey! Amber's great grandparents and Stars great-grandparents probably knew each other!!!
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Yeah, probably! Well, it depends on which Air Temple they grew up in...But yeah, the might've known each other! Ooh, maybe Star and Amber are related! (Razz Razz)
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Right!

Ooooooh maybe!!!! Very Happy
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maybe star and ambers grandparents got it on!
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*Trie not to laugh* Now.....Kip.......that kind of stuff.....isn't exctly........Bwahahahahahaha!!!!! That was hilarious!
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HAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Okay, that was.....messed up. In SO many ways.....*puts head in hands and sighs*
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tee hee hee
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