Characters!

Ooh, okay!!

Star has to go through a LOT, too! Hmm...should I tell you, or should I wait until you read it all (which might take a while)?

You could tell me.......and I have decided to give you a hint to one of the bad things that happens to him in the future. One word: Wedding.

Oh no! Not a wedding!!! NOOOO!!!!! THE HORROR!!!!!!

Don't worry, it ends in a way most weddings don't.....someone dying five seconds after the "You may kiss the bride."

Wow, that must stink!! Hehehe...'^^

Okay, since you only gave me a hint of something bad that's gonna happen in Jonathan's future, maybe I should only give you a hint of something bad that happens to Star in her future.
One word: Azula

Well, that's always bad news! I wonder what'll happen.....

Azula is always bad news, isn't she? Or, maybe Star will befriend Azula....You just never know (well, I do, but you don't! )

Hmmm...intrigue.

Ooh, big word! () What's it mean??? ( )

It means, like....hold on, let me look it up.(I'm not very good at describing what words mean, even when I know it myself. ^^')

intrigue: Main Entry: ¹in·trigue


Function: noun
Pronunciation: 'in-"treg, in-'
Etymology: French, intricate affair, from Italian intrigo, from intrigare to entangle, from Latin intricare
1 a : a secret scheme : MACHINATION b : the practice of engaging in intrigues
2 : a clandestine love affair

I meant it more as the first one.

Ohhhh, okay! I'm good with some big words (and I don't mean long words, I mean words like "disdain", thought that's not really a hard word to learn )

So, when do you think you might post Yuri's profile?

Oh yeah! Let me finish it (which should only take a few minutes) and I'll post it! I totally forgot about that!

Okay! ^^

Hullo, all! Elandri is here!

Alright here it is! Not the best, but it's gonna have to work...:

Name:Yuri

Height: 5'4

Age in story: 13

Birthplace: A city in the Fire Nation

Hair color, length, style: Long, black, braided like Ty Lee's

Race/nationality: Fire Nation

Handicaps: (emotional, physical, mental): She's a little...paronoid

Athletic? Inactive? Overall health? She trains nearly everyday, so she's pretty active.

Clothes: She wears a black and red top, the sleeves reaching a little past her elbows. She wears light-red pants that reach her ankles (like Ty Lee's). She wears red shoes, as well as a red headband.

Favorite color: Red

How does the character feel about his/her appearance? She could worry less about her appearence. All she's concerned with is her fighting and joining the war.

Brothers/sisters: She's an only child, but her mother is 2 months pregnant.

Relationship with parents: Her father left for the war, so she doesn't get to see him much at all. But her relationship with her mother is great.

Educational background: She went to one of the best schools in the Fire Nation, and now she goes to one of the best Earth Kingdom/Fire Nation schools in Ba Sing Se.

Occupation: Firebender/Fighter

Where does the character live now? Describe home: She lives in Ba Sing Se with her mother. It's a pretty big, fancy house....

Neat or messy? Sort of both....But mostly neat.

Friends: In old Ba Sing Se (where she lives now), she has no friends (yet)

Enemies? Why? Anyone but the Fire Nation is her enemy. Nothing is stronger than her passion to win the war and destroy all of the other nations.

Basic nature: Deffinatly a fighter.

Personality traits:Umm....She's honest, but not very nice....She's 'slightly paranoid', too. She's very tought, not afraid of anything, and she's always trying to start a fight.

Strongest trait: Her Firebending. She's been practicing since she could walk! (just kidding, but she's been practicing nearly her whole life)

Weakest trait: Umm....Not sure how to answer that....

What does the character fear? Loosing the war. But I wouldn't call that fear....Probably her father dying in the war.

What is the character proud of? Being Fire Nation.

What is the character ashamed of? Nothing.

Ambitions: For the Fire Nation to win the war, and to become an Agni Kai champions.

How does the character see herself?: As a strong, fearless fighter.

How is the character seen by others? Strong and not to be messed with.

Do you like this person? Why or why not? Yeah, I guess I like her....I like how she's not afraid of anything, and that she's always willing to fight. But she's deffinatly not my favorite character (that I've made)

Will readers like or dislike? I'm not sure....

Most important thing to know about this character: She's not afraid of anything and loves starting fights.

Present problem: Living in a city with mostly Earth Kingdom citizens who despise Fire Nation citizens completely.

How it will get worse: If she starts fights in school, it could get worse. Or, start fights anywhere else.

What is the character’s goal in the story? To fight in the war with her father.

What traits will help/hurt the character in achieving this goal?: Her Firebending and fighting will help her, but her..."not-willing-to-give-up" thing might hurt her a little....

What makes the character different from similar characters?: Umm....

Why will readers remember this character vividly? Umm.....(again)

That was good!

Yay!

So, has your friend started the next chapter?

Not yet. She hasn't let me e-mail the 3rd chapter to her yet! Oh well, I think I'll e-mail it now....

Okay, tell me when she sends you the next chapter!

Okay, I will!

Man, this thing got buried. I think I'll revive it. I did Jon's profile before, but I think I'll redo it.

Name: Jonathan Wayne

Height: 5'6-5'7

Age In Story: 14-16

Birthplace: Gotham City, New Jersey

Hair color, length, style: Dark brown, fairly short, usually kind of spiked up.

Race/nationality: Caucasian.

Regional influences: ...I have no idea what that means. ..El?

Accent: Eh, kind of a...I have no idea how to explain it. I can speak in his voice, but you guys obviously can't hear me.

Religion: No idea. He could be like me; believes in God and such but has no real set religion.

Marital status: Too young to even think about that.

Scars or other notable physical attributes: Nothing.

Handicaps: ...Nothing.

Athletic? Inactive? Overall health? Fairly healthy. Not exactly strong, but not too weak either.

Style of dress: Casual, usually. His uniform consists of a black t-shirt with a lightning bolt down the middle, a pair of combat boots, and a pair of black jeans.

Favorite colors: Green, maybe?

How does the character feel about his/her appearance? Doesn't care all too much, I guess.

Brothers/sisters: One step-brother.

Relationship with parents: Father: Not all too good. Hardly ever speaks to him. Mother: Deceased.

Memories about childhood: Fairly good until the age of six. Most of you know the rest, but that's the age when his mother was shot and killed before him.


Educational background: His not super intelligent or anything, but he does know his way around.

Work experience: Worked at a book store for a little while.

Occupation: Superhero and employee at the Book Nook.


Where does the character live now? Describe home: Used to live in a small apartment in old Jump City. Now lives in Titans Tower.

Neat or messy? In-between.

Sexual preferences/morals/activities: He'd probably wait for the right girl to come around. Obviously, I'm not going to explain any of that in any of my fan fics, seeing as though that'd be way too mature.

Women friends/men friends: Has a crush on one of the Teen Titans, but that's about it. That crush may become more.

Pets? Does Beast Boy count?

Enemies? Why? I'm not sure...The Joker, but he probably won't be making any appearances.

Basic nature: As is the nature of humans, is sometimes selfish. But, he is usually caring.

Personality traits (shy, outgoing, domineering, doormat, honest, kind, sense of humor): Not really sure...Just a normal guy who looks out for himself.

Strongest trait: His hard-headedness. (Yes, I DO know that is not a word.)

Weakest trait: His hard-headedness.

What does the character fear? Not very much, I don't think. The Joker, but he feels more rage towards him than he does fear.

What is the character proud of? ...No idea.

What is the character ashamed of? Oh, I'm sure he'll have SOMETHING to be ashamed of somewhere down the line. Nothing really so far, though.

Outlook on life (optimistic, pessimistic, cynic, idealist): Fairly pessimistic, like myself. You should hardly ever look on the bright side of things. If you have high expectations, they'll just get crushed.

Ambitions: Revenge, perhaps?

Politics: Democrat, as are most of my characters.

How does the character see himself/herself? I have no idea. Go ask him.

How is the character seen by others? Probably as a cocky, yet sometimes caring, teenager.

Do you like this person? Why or why not? Yes. He is the first character I ever created, and I just love his personality.

Will readers like or dislike? I don't know. Everyone has their own opinion.

Present problem: Keeping his secret ID from the Titans right this moment. He'll have quite a few problems in the chapters to come.

How it will get worse: Him moving into Titans Tower after his apartment burning down will probably make it a little harder.

What is the character’s goal in the story? As new problems arise, new goals will also come.

What makes the character different from similar characters? His personality, perhaps.

Why will readers remember this character vividly? I honestly do not know.

Ohh. Nice, Batgirl! ^^

Thanks.