Characters!

And I had already told you before that. But when people just keep on persisting, it annoys the heck out of me, and I get mad. Yeah, let's get on-topic, which I have no part in, so see ya.

I know it annoys the heck out of you, since you have been monotonously pointing this jewel of wisdom out repeatedly. I was not persisting, but I was curious, do I have to say it again? I, generally, don't persist as I know that it is, in fact, annoying.

Okay, I'm sorry if I was being mean. I was just in a really bad mood, and I wasn't meaning to. Up until today, I was just being really stressed out a lot, and I guess I was taking it out here. I'm really sorry, and it most definetly will not happen again.

wjats going on

You already kn-nevermind. I really don't want to get into another fight........I'm too worn out.....kinda bad when going on the computer to relax wears you out. Maybe I'll post another character profile later....kinda made another character........maybe I'll go eat now seeing as though no one's on.......

Well, here's Kahna as an adult now. See some minor changes.

Name: (Empress name) Kahneia Tanashi Kessendra, (informal name) Kahna Shinari

Height: 5 foot 5

Age in story: 21

Birthplace: Ashe

Hair color, length, style: Red-black, waist length, straight

Race/nationality: Ashen citizen

Accent: (include voice, style of speech, slang, signature phrases or words) Says 'y'know' a lot, sort of old fashioned-ish accent, but not heavy.

Religion: Believes in different gods

Marital status: Betrothed to Sharna, childhood friend

Scars or other notable physical attributes: Scar on left cheek

Athletic? Inactive? Overall health? Very athletic

Style of dress: Usually formal, but ready for battle. A long, black dress, usually.

Favorite colors: Silver

How does the character feel about his/her appearance? Doesn't really care

Brothers/sisters: Deceased

Relationship with parents: Parents deceased

Memories about childhood: She had no friends, and nobody to care for her, before she went on the dangerous journey to destory the empire

Educational background: (street smart? Formal? Does he/she read?) Loves reading

Work experience: None

Occupation: Empress of Ashe

Where does the character live now? Describe home (emotional atmosphere as well as physical) A large, well furnished castle. The occupants are usually stiff.

Neat or messy? Extremely neat

Pets? Wolf friends

Enemies? Why? None, yet.

Basic nature: Calm, cold, also hyperactive

Personality traits (shy, outgoing, domineering, doormat, honest, kind, sense of humor): Domineering

Strongest trait: Cool demeanor

What does the character fear? Being forgotten

What is the character proud of? Her status

What is the character ashamed of? Her heritage

Outlook on life (optimistic, pessimistic, cynic, idealist) Idealist

Ambitions: To stay a loyal friend

How is the character seen by others? Relaxed

Do you like this person? Why or why not? Yes. She has been through a lot and is similar to myself

Will readers like or dislike? It depends

Most important thing to know about this character: She had had a tough life, but is now the leader of the country

Present problem: Others do not approve of her being empress

What is the character’s goal in the story? To become the best leader she can be

What traits will help/hurt the character in achieving this goal? Her relaxed nature, and her friendly demeanor

What makes the character different from similar characters? She is totally unpredictable, but is always calm

Why will readers remember this character vividly? Because, apart from being the main character, she is empress

Nice, nice...Kahna, the empress? Cool.

Yeah, but I'm not gonna tell how she gets that title... she didn't want it to start off with!

Hmmm.........

So... are you making up any more characters?

Yeah, I have another that I've sort of already done.....I wouldn't be able to put much of the info, but I might put it here later. His name is Striker.....

Oooh, nice.

Yeah...he's been around for a while in my head...finally got him in my story....

Ooh, Striker! He's the one who was in your sequel to your story, right??

Yep! It's gonna take a few minutes to do it, but I'm gonna do his bio/profile thing right now.

Here it is, Striker!

Name: Striker (No last name.)

Height: About 5'8

Age in story: 15

Hair color, length, style: Dark brown, unable to see the lengh under his mask, but a little above the middle of his neck, and wears it in a small ponytail that sticks out of the back of his cloth mask.

Accent: A very cold, steely voice.

Scars or other notable physical attributes: A long scar that goes from a little above his right eye, jagged down his eye, then ends about half an inch under his right eye. Unable to see this under his mask.

Handicaps: Many bruises on his body, from being punished by his master for not succeding in things such as training and.....not completing missions. This sometimes slows him down in battle when the bruises have recently been inflicted. He also sometimes feel slike there's some sort of battle going on in his mind.

Athletic? Inactive? Overall health?: Besides the bruises, he is quite healthy. He works out for two hours evry day, and does a small workout before bed. In top physical health.

Style of dress: Very appropiate(sp?)for battle. If you want more info, ask.

Memories about childhood: His memories are all very foggy.

Educational background: He is very smart, especially when it comes to battle tactics.

Occupation: Apprentice to Slade.

Where does the character live now? Describe home: He lives with Slade in an underground hideout/labratory. Not the nicest place to live.

Neat or messy?: Neat.

Enemies? Why?: The Teen Titans. Because his master said so. ()

Basic nature: A natural-born fighter. Would kill if he was told to.

Personality traits (shy, outgoing, domineering, doormat, honest, kind, sense of humor): He is very cold, and not very talkative.

What does the character fear?: Sometimes, his master.

Outlook on life: He sees everything at it's worst. For instance, when he sees a house, he doesn't see kids happily playing out on the lawn, he sees a family dying in a house fire. The only time he looks for something good is in battle, when he has to use evreything to his advantage.

How does the character see himself/herself?: As a man who needs to become stronger, to prove himself in the mind of his master.

How is the character seen by others?: By the Teen Titans: As another enemy, a very, very strong enemy. By Slade: As his pawn, his tool.

Do you like this person? Why or why not?: Yes, I do. He is a little like me sometimes.

Will readers like or dislike?: He'll probably one of those characters you love to hate.

Why will readers remember this character vividly?: Trust me, they'll remember his story. It's not a very ordinary one, to say the least.


Okay, wow, I skipped a lot of those! By the way, Ember, did I send you Chapter 1 of the sequel yet?

I thought you said you like to take time to create characters...

I've been creating this character for a year. Or more.

Okies ^_^

Uh-huh...anyways, besides that, what'd you think of him?

It sounds pretty good ^_^
...But, I have some comments to make (Oh, El's dreaded comments!) - only one this time. Pawns, in a game of chess, are very valuable, you know. I hate when people speak of pawns as if they're nothing. They can do heaps of things, including allowing you to get your taken pieces back. That's it!

Yes, I know that. I wasn't talking of him as if he's nothing, oh, most definetly not. His obeys his master, he does nothing but obey his master, so, in a sense, he's his tool, his....warrior, perhaps. But, his master knows Striker could kill him if he wanted to....but he doesn't.

I know you know that, I was pointing it out. I love chess. Never lost a game to my sister.

Yeah, me too. I don't get to play it much, though....I'm not always that good at it either...heh.

Hehe, I've never played chess...