Story Time!

Hi people!
This is a contest where you have to write a story based on a phrase.

The phrase is 'the love life overcomes the fear of death'.

The best story writer will get a prize!

Get writing!

don't sleep with a dog there r flees

is If of??
I'm just going to asume it is so here is my entry

Life's not fair, I thought. I sobbed into my pillow when suddenly somebody appeared in my room. It was a girl with eyes that were a little bit sad but not mostly. She smiled sort of at me. "didn't you know Life is a blessing"? I shook my head. "Everyone is out to get me". The angel or whatever she was smiled gently. That is what you think Kiersten. Life is a blessing. Enjoy it while it lasts, for me it didn't last long enough. I stared at the personage. What do you mean? I demanded.
The angel sighed softly. I knew you would need convincing.
She started her story.
My name is Katelyn Williams. I was born to a rather rich family in the 1800's. When I was eighteen years old I was murdered or so it was thought by my beau Johnathan Jones. In reality I had taken my life because of something that I had been upset about it. And then I became what I am right now and I have always regretted it.
Now, Christie. You do not want to make the choice that I did. It wrecked a lot of lives. I had a fear of death. And, I hated life. I overcame that fear by dying. Loving life is the key to overcomming that fear. I see a lot of myself in you. Christie you do not want to make this desicion. Love life, don't wallow in it. I thought about it and concluded that I would put my plans off for a bit, however I would almost ignore what she was saying. Almost. Only, I would love life.

Great job!

ok me- the love life overcomes the fear of death

Mom was gone. The police was still looking for them. "Where was she last?" and things like that. I wondered how was that going to get her back. But I was 6-so I never really knew that they can't just get her here in a few minutes. But I did know that she was gone.
My brother, Jason, was 13. He was crying alot. I NEVER saw him cry. Like when he got burnt before-really badly- he just stared at it like a bruise.
"When is she coming back?" I asked.
"I don't know-I really don't know."
So this was his stupid answer?
"NO! Lets go LOOK for her!"
But I couldn't go out.
See, I got this really bad sickness where I can't go outside-only at night. I always had it. No lamps at all.
No nightlights.
No nothing like that.
"You know you can't. Not even in the night. Mom would never forgive you for it."
I cried.
"HOW did she leave?"
"Went to the store-never came back-I am sorry Emily."
But I knew she WILL come back.

The next day

The police came. The man was sad-red eyes and all.
He only wanted to talk to Jason.
"No!" I said. "I AM STAYING!"
But Jason shouted, "GO EMILY!"
I cried even more.
But I left-but at my room I could hear the police man.
"We saw a car crashed against the woods. It was your mother's. We are so sorry."
No...
Mom was gone-forever.
That was it...
~~~
Jason lock himself in his room-but I just stared outside through the curtains.
"Emily...."
"Huh?"
I smiled. "Mommy!" It sounded like her!
I went to peek outside. Mom was there. All white. But it was Mom. She was pretty.
I gulped, Mom was there-but outside.
I wanted to go out there-but the sun. So hot...
"No..." I thought. "Time for me to do it."
I opened the door.
I ran on the grass...then burst into mom's hug.
"Emliy-you shouldn't. Go back. I will be here. You will be safe."
"No..."
"Thank you...bye...my nightgirl..."
I cried.
"Bye-bye"
Mom left. Then I screamed-& fainted.
"EMILY!" I heard Jason.
"Mommy was here..."
~~~~~
I am ok.
I am 10 & the sun surprisely didn't do anything to me when I was 6.
Because of Mom, I say.
Jason smiles, "Yeah-Emily."
My aunt believed my story.
"Wow...I believe in that alright."
Jason didn't.
But all I know I was safe.
Thanks Mom.

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hope you like it-

^^ Awesome job!

thanks

Really well written!

thanks!!

That was very intresting!
So, is she like a supernatural creature because she can't go out in the sun or does she just have really pale skin that burns very easily?(like Mulch in Artemis Fowl?)

Very, very cool! Yeah, is she like, an Albino?

its a REAL sickness!
:0!
i found out about it when i read this book called i think Moon Girl or Moonlight!
It was cool
but short.

so it was REAL thing-
but not the ghost part...

cool

Wow, that's amazing!

oh yeah...

Huh?

wait that wasnt suppose to be there......

huh

Yeah, really confusing!

anyone else is going to do this?

do what

the story

i don't have the time..