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 We Can Stop the Fighting - A Poem I Wrote

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PostSubject: We Can Stop the Fighting - A Poem I Wrote   We Can Stop the Fighting - A Poem I Wrote Icon_minitimeFri Sep 28, 2007 12:20 am
We can stop the fighting
But we are not really trying
We can stop the fighting
If everyone does their part

What does our fighting bring us?
Pain, remorse, hatred and anger
We can stop the fighting
If we really start trying

Tears are shed, loved ones lost,
We can stop the fighting, now
All we need to do is try
We can't just sit there and cry

Is fighting really the answer?
We can come up with a better solution

Time is still ticking away
We still haven't learned,
So what have we gained?
We can stop the fighting

As you fall asleep,
Remember,
Fighting only brings pain, remorse, hatred and anger,
And ask yourself:
Do I really need to live my life like this?

We can stop the fighting.

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Not really a poem, but I really wanted to get my message across in poetry, so I tried.
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PostSubject: Re: We Can Stop the Fighting - A Poem I Wrote   We Can Stop the Fighting - A Poem I Wrote Icon_minitimeFri Sep 28, 2007 1:31 am
you sussided
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PostSubject: Re: We Can Stop the Fighting - A Poem I Wrote   We Can Stop the Fighting - A Poem I Wrote Icon_minitimeMon Oct 01, 2007 5:58 pm
I think that would make a really good song. Its very good!!
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PostSubject: Re: We Can Stop the Fighting - A Poem I Wrote   We Can Stop the Fighting - A Poem I Wrote Icon_minitimeTue Oct 02, 2007 3:29 am
you no...*rereads it* it could that would be an awsome song
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PostSubject: Re: We Can Stop the Fighting - A Poem I Wrote   We Can Stop the Fighting - A Poem I Wrote Icon_minitimeSun Oct 21, 2007 3:54 am
Thanks, I'll try putting it to music, and maybe post a voice clip of me singing it.
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PostSubject: Re: We Can Stop the Fighting - A Poem I Wrote   We Can Stop the Fighting - A Poem I Wrote Icon_minitimeSun Oct 21, 2007 6:57 pm
cool tell us how it goes
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PostSubject: Re: We Can Stop the Fighting - A Poem I Wrote   We Can Stop the Fighting - A Poem I Wrote Icon_minitimeSun Oct 28, 2007 10:24 am
Sure I am still working on it though!
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