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PostSubject: Re: Sword Fighting Show Down: The Future   Sun Mar 01, 2009 11:30 am

She didn't really seem like a character, more of a Mary-Sue with emotions to suit what I was writing, not her own.

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PostSubject: Re: Sword Fighting Show Down: The Future   Sun Mar 01, 2009 12:15 pm

Ah.

Soo...who wants to start this rewrite?

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PostSubject: Re: Sword Fighting Show Down: The Future   Sun Mar 01, 2009 4:43 pm

Eh, you can if you want to. I started it last time, so you or Star can do it. Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: Sword Fighting Show Down: The Future   Mon Mar 02, 2009 6:50 am

Alright then!

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Lost. That's what I was, completely and utterly lost. I was lost in this forest that seemed to go on forever, and I was really starting to get annoyed. The last thing I remembered was going to sleep, next thing I know, I'm in this forest. I'm in this forest, walking around aimlessly with nothing but the clothes on my back and a sword I barely remembered even owning.

I'd been wandering around this wretched forest for what I estimated to be about two hours when I noticed someone ahead. They looked to be a woman. I let out a sigh of relief, and started walking towards them. I was only guessing this person would know the way out, and that they would possibly be perhaps friendlier than I.

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'Tis it! Yeah...I hope it ish good.

Quick description of Jon's appearance: Black jeans, dark blue long-sleeved shirt. He has black hair that has grown down to around about the middle of his neck. ...Oh, and combat boots. Oh! And his black trenchcoat-like thing.

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PostSubject: Re: Sword Fighting Show Down: The Future   Mon Mar 02, 2009 6:55 am

(I hope I won't bug anyone by asking this, but do you think we could make a new thread for this, and maybe delete this one? Well, now that I think of it, we wouldn't have to delete this one, just making new thread would make it, in my opinion, easier. '^^
And nice begining by the way. :])

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PostSubject: Re: Sword Fighting Show Down: The Future   Mon Mar 02, 2009 6:58 am

(Yeah, let's not delete this...I hate deleteing stuff. It's nice to be able to go back and read stuff.

Okay, I'll create a new thread and re-post. ^^ What should I name it? Just the same thing with a "Rewrite" at the end?)

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PostSubject: Re: Sword Fighting Show Down: The Future   Mon Mar 02, 2009 7:01 am

(Yeah, I started thinking about that (deleting it) after I posted my previous post, and I was like "...Maybe we shouldn't delete it." But yeah, you should just name it something like "Sword Fighting Show Down: The Future (Rewrite)"...or something. '^^)

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PostSubject: Re: Sword Fighting Show Down: The Future   Mon Mar 02, 2009 7:05 am

(Okay! I'll go do that now.)

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PostSubject: Re: Sword Fighting Show Down: The Future   Mon Mar 02, 2009 7:06 am

(Alright! I shall sit here and wait patiently....*waits*...)

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PostSubject: Re: Sword Fighting Show Down: The Future   Mon Mar 02, 2009 7:08 am

(It is posted! ^_^)

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PostSubject: Re: Sword Fighting Show Down: The Future   Mon Mar 02, 2009 7:12 am

(Yayness! Razz)

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PostSubject: Re: Sword Fighting Show Down: The Future   Mon Mar 02, 2009 7:24 am

(Yay! ...Who's gonna post next?)

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PostSubject: Re: Sword Fighting Show Down: The Future   Mon Mar 02, 2009 7:57 am

(Ohh, ohh! Mee, meeee!! xP)

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PostSubject: Re: Sword Fighting Show Down: The Future   Mon Mar 02, 2009 11:56 am

(Okay! ^^)

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