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Elandri Admin

 Joined : 06 Apr 2007 Posts : 4458 Current Location : Lurking in the shadows... Humor : There was an author who wrote a book on how to read Hobbies : I dunno. Reading, writing, drawing. Character sheet Harry Potter:
 | Subject: Re: Write A Story Together Sat Mar 15, 2008 9:20 am | |
| Elaria was tired out. She shook her head, closing her eyes. _________________
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Batgirl Admin

 Age : 13 Joined : 09 Jan 2008 Posts : 9293 Current Location : The Magical Land of Oranges and 'Gators. Hobbies : Uh...Reading, Writing, and stuff. Character sheet Harry Potter:
 | Subject: Re: Write A Story Together Sat Mar 15, 2008 9:22 am | |
| (I can't really think of anything...could you post a little more? ) _________________ All-American Rejects~Your Star
"Now I go away Now I know todaaay..... I picked out your star Turned night to day A simple whisper from your voice And I fade away You wish for love You push me away Your love for me was everything I need The air I breathe" |
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Elandri Admin

 Joined : 06 Apr 2007 Posts : 4458 Current Location : Lurking in the shadows... Humor : There was an author who wrote a book on how to read Hobbies : I dunno. Reading, writing, drawing. Character sheet Harry Potter:
 | Subject: Re: Write A Story Together Sat Mar 15, 2008 9:23 am | |
| (Yep!) Elaria watched Taye. She knew he had used too much energy. His movements became sluggish, his face contorted with pain. "Made your last fire, Taye?" Elaria asked. _________________
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Batgirl Admin

 Age : 13 Joined : 09 Jan 2008 Posts : 9293 Current Location : The Magical Land of Oranges and 'Gators. Hobbies : Uh...Reading, Writing, and stuff. Character sheet Harry Potter:
 | Subject: Re: Write A Story Together Sat Mar 15, 2008 10:42 am | |
| "Not even close." He made a ball of fire, bigger then the others, in his hand. He aimed it at Elaria's face, and threw it. _________________ All-American Rejects~Your Star
"Now I go away Now I know todaaay..... I picked out your star Turned night to day A simple whisper from your voice And I fade away You wish for love You push me away Your love for me was everything I need The air I breathe" |
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Elandri Admin

 Joined : 06 Apr 2007 Posts : 4458 Current Location : Lurking in the shadows... Humor : There was an author who wrote a book on how to read Hobbies : I dunno. Reading, writing, drawing. Character sheet Harry Potter:
 | Subject: Re: Write A Story Together Sat Mar 15, 2008 10:58 am | |
| Elaria jumped up, adrenaline racing through her body. She leaped at Taye with an ice sword, ready to strike. _________________
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Batgirl Admin

 Age : 13 Joined : 09 Jan 2008 Posts : 9293 Current Location : The Magical Land of Oranges and 'Gators. Hobbies : Uh...Reading, Writing, and stuff. Character sheet Harry Potter:
 | Subject: Re: Write A Story Together Sat Mar 15, 2008 10:59 am | |
| He dodged it. He was behind her in a second. He kicked her in the back, making her fall forward. _________________ All-American Rejects~Your Star
"Now I go away Now I know todaaay..... I picked out your star Turned night to day A simple whisper from your voice And I fade away You wish for love You push me away Your love for me was everything I need The air I breathe" |
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Elandri Admin

 Joined : 06 Apr 2007 Posts : 4458 Current Location : Lurking in the shadows... Humor : There was an author who wrote a book on how to read Hobbies : I dunno. Reading, writing, drawing. Character sheet Harry Potter:
 | Subject: Re: Write A Story Together Sat Mar 15, 2008 11:01 am | |
| Elaira yelped. He had his foot on her back triumphantly. Elaria glared at the dirt in front of her. _________________
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Batgirl Admin

 Age : 13 Joined : 09 Jan 2008 Posts : 9293 Current Location : The Magical Land of Oranges and 'Gators. Hobbies : Uh...Reading, Writing, and stuff. Character sheet Harry Potter:
 | Subject: Re: Write A Story Together Sat Mar 15, 2008 11:03 am | |
| (I think I'm going to switch the POV.)
I watched as Elaria fell forward. Taye put his foot on her back, then pressed down quite hard. _________________ All-American Rejects~Your Star
"Now I go away Now I know todaaay..... I picked out your star Turned night to day A simple whisper from your voice And I fade away You wish for love You push me away Your love for me was everything I need The air I breathe" |
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Elandri Admin

 Joined : 06 Apr 2007 Posts : 4458 Current Location : Lurking in the shadows... Humor : There was an author who wrote a book on how to read Hobbies : I dunno. Reading, writing, drawing. Character sheet Harry Potter:
 | Subject: Re: Write A Story Together Sat Mar 15, 2008 11:05 am | |
| (fine with me!)
"Agh!" Elaria yelled. "Taye," she growled. "Waht do you want?" _________________
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Batgirl Admin

 Age : 13 Joined : 09 Jan 2008 Posts : 9293 Current Location : The Magical Land of Oranges and 'Gators. Hobbies : Uh...Reading, Writing, and stuff. Character sheet Harry Potter:
 | Subject: Re: Write A Story Together Sat Mar 15, 2008 11:08 am | |
| Taye bent down, still pressing harder. He put his mouth right next to Elaria's ear.
"All I want, is to see you suffer, my dear."
He took out his dagger. He made a slice on the back of Elaria's neck. _________________ All-American Rejects~Your Star
"Now I go away Now I know todaaay..... I picked out your star Turned night to day A simple whisper from your voice And I fade away You wish for love You push me away Your love for me was everything I need The air I breathe" |
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Elandri Admin

 Joined : 06 Apr 2007 Posts : 4458 Current Location : Lurking in the shadows... Humor : There was an author who wrote a book on how to read Hobbies : I dunno. Reading, writing, drawing. Character sheet Harry Potter:
 | Subject: Re: Write A Story Together Sat Mar 15, 2008 11:09 am | |
| Elaria closed her eyes, bracing herself. _________________
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Batgirl Admin

 Age : 13 Joined : 09 Jan 2008 Posts : 9293 Current Location : The Magical Land of Oranges and 'Gators. Hobbies : Uh...Reading, Writing, and stuff. Character sheet Harry Potter:
 | Subject: Re: Write A Story Together Sat Mar 15, 2008 11:11 am | |
| I couldn't take it anymore. I could baerly move, but I had to help Elaria. He made a cut on her cheek. I saw the blood, and I knew I had to save her. I got a sudden burst of energy. I ran at him, then tackled him off of Elaria. _________________ All-American Rejects~Your Star
"Now I go away Now I know todaaay..... I picked out your star Turned night to day A simple whisper from your voice And I fade away You wish for love You push me away Your love for me was everything I need The air I breathe" |
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Elandri Admin

 Joined : 06 Apr 2007 Posts : 4458 Current Location : Lurking in the shadows... Humor : There was an author who wrote a book on how to read Hobbies : I dunno. Reading, writing, drawing. Character sheet Harry Potter:
 | Subject: Re: Write A Story Together Sat Mar 15, 2008 11:12 am | |
| Elaria pulled herself up sluggishly. Her head ached, and then felt warm liquid dripping off her face. Blood. _________________
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Batgirl Admin

 Age : 13 Joined : 09 Jan 2008 Posts : 9293 Current Location : The Magical Land of Oranges and 'Gators. Hobbies : Uh...Reading, Writing, and stuff. Character sheet Harry Potter:
 | Subject: Re: Write A Story Together Sat Mar 15, 2008 11:16 am | |
| He made a cut on my face, but I didn't care. He didn't seem very good in close combat. I punched him in the face, then in the stomach. Then, he did something I hadn't expected. He threw his dagger at Elaria. She hadn't been paying attention, and was still a little weak. It went straight into her leg, and I heard her grunt in pain.
"You'll pay for that!" I yelled, then punched him in the face again. I guess I was stronger then I thought, because I knocked him out. I ran over to Elaria, who was tring to pull out the dagger. _________________ All-American Rejects~Your Star
"Now I go away Now I know todaaay..... I picked out your star Turned night to day A simple whisper from your voice And I fade away You wish for love You push me away Your love for me was everything I need The air I breathe" |
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